Informative Essay
Planning
- You made a writing plan. The plan includes notes (not full sentences) for the introduction and the main body.
Language (60%)
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You did not use first-person pronouns (I / we).
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You did not use contractions (they’ve => they have; won’t => will not; isn’t => is not).
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Does the text connect ideas with transition words? For example:
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Compare and contrast: like, similar to, compared to, although;
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Examples: for example, for instance, such as, Another example of XXX is YYY;
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To conclude: in summary, to sum up, in conclusion, as a result
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You use a wide range of grammatical structures correctly.
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You use a wide range of vocabulary correctly and you paraphrase words you don’t know. You don’t use German.
Content (40%)
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The text has an informative title, which gives the reader a first idea of what the text will be about.
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The writing is factual: I didn’t present opinions (I think ..., … is good / bad / cool …) or fiction, just facts.
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Does the introduction hook the reader, for example with an unusual detail or a question?
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Does the introduction end in a thesis statement (one sentence, which tells the reader the claim of the text)?
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Does the main body present subtopics with a new paragraph for every subtopic? (For most tasks you write in class, you will only have time for two subtopics.)
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Does every body paragraph start with a topic sentence. The topic sentence presents the main idea or claim of the paragraph in one sentence.
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Does every body paragraph present reasons (explanation) and examples to support the topic sentence (i.e. supporting sentences).
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Does the text have a concluding paragraph, which sums up the main points and restates the thesis statement in a new way?
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Does the text answer the question / fulfil the task you were given (= beantwortet der Text die Frage / erfüllt der Text die Aufgabe die dir gegeben wurde)?
For the structure of a paragraph, see also the checklist for writing a paragraph.
Form
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You included an estimate1 of the word count.
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You skip every second line, and you skip two or more lines between paragraphs.
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estimate: Schätzung ↩