Informative Essay

Planning

  • You made a writing plan. The plan includes notes (not full sentences) for the introduction and the main body.

Language (60%)

  • You did not use first-person pronouns (I / we).

  • You did not use contractions (they’ve => they have; won’t => will not; isn’t => is not).

  • Does the text connect ideas with transition words? For example:

    • Compare and contrast: like, similar to, compared to, although;

    • Examples: for example, for instance, such as, Another example of XXX is YYY;

    • To conclude: in summary, to sum up, in conclusion, as a result

  • You use a wide range of grammatical structures correctly.

  • You use a wide range of vocabulary correctly and you paraphrase words you don’t know. You don’t use German.

Content (40%)

  • The text has an informative title, which gives the reader a first idea of what the text will be about.

  • The writing is factual: I didn’t present opinions (I think ..., … is good / bad / cool …) or fiction, just facts.

  • Does the introduction hook the reader, for example with an unusual detail or a question?

  • Does the introduction end in a thesis statement (one sentence, which tells the reader the claim of the text)?

  • Does the main body present subtopics with a new paragraph for every subtopic? (For most tasks you write in class, you will only have time for two subtopics.)

  • Does every body paragraph start with a topic sentence. The topic sentence presents the main idea or claim of the paragraph in one sentence.

  • Does every body paragraph present reasons (explanation) and examples to support the topic sentence (i.e. supporting sentences).

  • Does the text have a concluding paragraph, which sums up the main points and restates the thesis statement in a new way?

  • Does the text answer the question / fulfil the task you were given (= beantwortet der Text die Frage / erfüllt der Text die Aufgabe die dir gegeben wurde)?

For the structure of a paragraph, see also the checklist for writing a paragraph.

Form

  • You included an estimate1 of the word count.

  • You skip every second line, and you skip two or more lines between paragraphs.

  1. estimate: Schätzung